Don't over pay for your next car. Why buy a 2002 or 2003 car for $22,000 when you can have an 05 dual suspended car.
I'd say delete this part. Kinda makes it sound like it's sitting on a car lot.
Have all the positives about the car, even the negatives. It'll sell itself that way. How it drives, what times it's turned, etc.
Anyone else?